Question: In the following email, what style problem does SENTENCE 6 contain? TO: All employees FROM: Janice Logan, IT Manager DATE: March 3 , 2 0

In the following email, what style problem does SENTENCE 6 contain?
TO: All employees
FROM: Janice Logan, IT Manager
DATE: March 3,2003
SUBJECT: Meeting to discuss new copier, March 31,3:00-3:30 pm
(1) Please congregate in the work room on Thursday, March 31, from 3:00 to 3:30 pm to learn about our new company copier.
(2) Our employees have complained about several problems with our current machine. (3) Therefore, we have made a decision to purchase a new copier, the Xorex 9000.(4) With this large-scale machine, we can produce our spiral-bound books much faster.
(5) At the meeting Richard Farley, the training director at Creative Technologies, will provide a hands-on demonstration for each staff member. (6) Attached please find a copy of the operating manual for the Xorex 9000.

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