In this exercise, please read Stephen Elop $-$ Message to Employees and revise the document. Attempt to cut the document in half. In your revision, you will want to identify sentences that are not complete, concise, or natural, and rewrite them. Use information, headings and other design features presented in Chapter $5$ and $6$ to improve navagation. Make it better...

This exercise and suggestions on what to look for can be found in Chapter $7$ Evaluation Exercises on pg$.223.$

When you do make edits, please highlight the part you edited $($the original$)$ in italics so I can see what you are changing. For this assignment, this is what I want to focus on$,$ as well as sentence flow and message presented.

Please upload your document as a $.$docx document.