In July 2015, Stephen Elop announced major changes at Microsoft.

Read the message at http://news.microsoft.com/2014/07/17/stephenelops-

email-to-employees/.

Analyze this message for ease of reading in the following ways:

A. Identify and revise five sentences that are not complete.

B. Identify and revise five sentences that are not concise.

C. Identify and revise five sentences that are not natural.

D. Explain three strategies for designing the document for faster navigation.

E. Revise the document. Attempt to cut the length in half. Use headings and other design features to improve navigation.