Instructions:

Revise and expand your summary assignment. During the revision process, it is your job to read your work and correct all instances of any issues.

1. Tighten your sentences; remove repetitions.
2. Include a thesis statement in the first sentence and use the word argues.
3. Mention all of the authors/activists she references, not only Desmond Cole. One way of explaining who said what is to say, for example: Referencing X, Moriah explains/point out/ shares/ notes, etc.
4. What type of discriminatory practices does Cole mention? Be specific.
5. What does Moriah conclude?

In the article "How black racism on Canada University campuses robs us all " Kristin Moriah Queen's University, Ontario Stromberg (2020). First of all, she talks about how anti-black racism isn't only limited to Queen's University, like Desmond Cole's work talks about how even the brightest and most gifted Black Canadians from the elite Canadian university campuses were also subjected to discriminatory treatments. She also shares how in the moment young and prominent young black writers and activists writes about their experiences in their higher educations and how this helped shaped their activism. How elite Canadian spaces are terrifying sites of racial discriminations where the white-privileged are untouchable and young black students are left unprotected, that if they were ever to ask for hello it would probably be brushed off or never looked unto. Although racial violence against indigenous or native American students verbal assault in their hall. In addition, some of the most effective Black Lives Matter-Toronto protests and organisation were driven by black students.