Part 1: RevisionRead the following document and identifyerrors in format, sentence structure, punctuation, word choice, word formation, tone, numbers, or capitalization. Re-write the poorly written message into an effective one, focussing on conciseness, accuracy, positive and bias-free expression, clearof grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors. (20points)Nanaimo SportsCentreVancouverBranch 8791AustinStreet Vancouver, BC Y2P 2P8November 27, 2019Ms. R.FergusonFergusonAthleticApparel315 Massey Cr. Port Moody, BC Z6T 3B5Dear Ms. Ferguson:Were collecting for the local Nanaimo Sports Centre?We have chosen $28.00 as a fair minimum for businesses to give.But bigger amounts would bestronglyrecommended. Our Centre totallyrequires your donation.As we speak, about 430 teenagers dontgets to participate in Nanaimo Sports activities unless more money are donated.Nanaimo Sports is a truly worthwhile program.In my opinion, business leaders of any age should support it. I assume youare by now familiar with our organization, but if youve never heard about us, here is the scoop.Nanaimo Sports Centre is an organization for high school youngsters.They find work with local businesses and then form small businesses and then they opperate these businesses.During they operate the businesses they also learn about usrunning the business.This is good, I think, and we should all help. Hoping to get your substantial donation as soon as possible,Sincerely, William Barnett, Presiden