Part 3: Revision - Correct the weaknesses in wording, style, tone, and structure Revise the document so that its formatting and text are significantly improved. Phillip Boss has written this draft of a letter to a longtime friend and business associate, George Morrison Boss is replying to an invitation to a lunch celebrating Morrison's promotion to Marketing Manager at Warren Enterprises COMM 11061 Lazar Midterm Exam Page 3 Dear George Regarding you new job at Warren Enterprises, its indeed a pleasure to learn that you are now Marketing Manager. In this day and age of cutthroat competition, its extremely gratifying when a man of very great talent and tried-and-true ability gets his just deserts so to speak Its a genuine disappointment that I cannot be present on your cellebration party which will be hold on Monday, the twelfth of July, due to the fact that I will be otherwise engaged at a meeting. The meeting, which has been scheduled since last month, is with a wealthy investor, who is from New York and who is coming here for the purpose of making an investment in a business. When all is said and done, its to be hoped that the final result is worth the expenditure of effort on my part at this point in time. Let me repeat my regret at the impossibility of my presence on that occasion of joyous cellebration. While in my absence please extend my sincere best whishes to your better half Yours truly, Phillip