Part One: Proofreading (10 marks) Rewrite the sentences below so they are mistake free. Do not worry about style or content. Focus on actual errors. There may be several errors in each sentence. 1. My expectations and goals for the 'Introduction Presentation' were express confidence and credibility on the topic. I wanted confident with my delivery and using different vocal tones on dialogue. 2. Virtualization allows the possibility of doing data analysist on multiple networks without compromise security 3. A smoke filled room create a toxic level of carbon monoxide which effects person's sensory organs. 4. The reason this issue arise is that I send you not the new version therefore I apologize. If there is anything else I can do please call me at 777-777-9999 ext.587 5. She said the acid smells like Bleach and it is very hard to breath in their 6. Everything else looks great, please change the theme to "Executive Class and the hour to the new one's discussed on our meeting 7. Firstly, Thank you to make our company's website and it is well organized. But unfortunately, it seems some errors like incorrect theme and the opening hours. So, please you should correct that errors as soon as possible. 8. I conducted a survey asking people, "If they are working is their dream job?" 9. We made our decision that your request of promotion will discuss later. 10. Further details to be available on this situation and for details please contact me