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15.1 Document for Analysis: Poorly Written Highlights: Rsum (L.0.4) Named Line Manger of the Month at Target, 10/2014 and 03/2015 One effective way to improve your writing skills is to critique and edit the rsum of someone else. Obtained a Certificate in Entry Level Accounting, June 2015 YOUR TASK Analyze the following poor rsum. List at least eight weaknesses. Your instructor may ask you to revise sections Chair of Accounting Society, Spring and fall 2017 of this rsum before showing you an improved version. Dean's Honor List, Fall 2017 Rsum Financial advisor training completed through Primerica Camille Elena Montano (May 2016) 1340 East Phillips Ave., Apt. D Littleton, CO 80126 Webmaster for M.E.Ch.A, Spring 2017 Phone 455-5182 | E-Mail: Hotchilibabe@gmail.com | LinkedIn OBJECTIVE Part-Time Employment I'm dying to become an accounting associate in the "real Financial Consultant, 2016 to present I worked only world with a big profitable company that will help me get part-time (January 2016-present) for Primerica Finan- the experience I need to become a CPA. cial Services, Pueblo, CO to assist clients in refinancing SKILLS a mortgage or consolidating a current mortgage loan Microsoft Word, MS Outlook, Powerpoint, Excel, spread- and also to advice clients in assessing their need for life sheets Excel; experienced with QuickBooks, great compo- insurance. sure in stressful situations; 3 years as leader and supervisor Target, Littleton, Co. As line manager, from September 2014 - and 4 years in customer service August 2015, I supervised 12 cashiers and front-end associ- EDUCATION ates. I helped to write schedules, disciplinary action notices, Arapahoe Community College, Littleton, Colorado. AA and performance appraisals. I also kept track of change degree, Fall 2015 drawer and money exchanges; occasionally was manager on duty for entire store. Named line manager of the month Now I am pursuing a BA in Accounting at CSU-Pueblo, major- August 2014 and March 2015. ing in Accounting; my minor is Finance. Completed 64 units of upper-level units. My expected degree date is June 2018; 1 Mr. K's Floral Design of Denver. I taught flower design from recieved a Certificate of Completion in Entry Level Accounting August, 2013 to September, 2014. | supervised 5 florists, in December 2015. My overall GPA is 3.5 on a 4.0 = A system. made floral arrangements for big events like weddings, send them to customers, and restocked flowers. I graduated East High School, Denver, CO in 2011