Please re write this email in professional communication.

don't change it , just make it formal.

Re-write the email below: Employees, we are cutting our staff by 20% this year This will happen by the end of December, so you need to start improving your sales rates immediately! From now, your monthly sales records will be checked and recorded. Anyone who is under $20,000 for the month will get a warning. If you get two warnings, you will be let go. Rollco Hardware has had a difficult financial year serious decisions need to be made. That is why management has decided to reduce staff. I know this will upset and disappoint you, but you need work harder to keep your jobs. and so Thanks, Tim Horton, General Manager