Problem 1 Avoid excessive use of the passive voice as well as the trite and outdated expressions in this letter. Be as specific as possible about the date of the event include the day of the week. There are several glaring grammatical errors. You need a very specific response date as well. Some of the material should be created with bullets using parallel structure. Letter to: Mr. and Mrs. Dennis Manheim, 293 Cedar Hills Road, Forestdale, IN 47538 Dear Sir (supply the correct salutation): We received your letter requesting information about The Maestro Spring Music Academy for gifted and talented elementary school students. It would appear that your daughter Caroline is indeed eligible. The dates are MWF from April 8 to May 17 from 3:30 to 6. The Academy will not meet the week of April 22. In order for you to learn more about our program, you are invited to attend our Open House on March 21. At that time our music teachers will be available to answer your questions. Every day from 3:30 to 4 students can work on their own compositions in our computer lab. From 4:15pm to 4:45, we provide ab individual lesson in voice or instrument. Each student can choose their favorite ensemble activity including chorus band or orchestra. A snack is provided. From 5 to 5\"45 students participate in either hand, orchestra, or chorus. Maestro Academy also has transportation available from your childs school to the Academy if you need it. Herewith, please do us the honor of attending by completing the attached form and returning it to us post haste. We are serving refreshments and want to make sure we have enough. All efforts will be expended to make sure you and your daughter enjoy the open house