question :- Reply comment to given idea

After my mentor go over my marketing plan with me, he came up with some recommendations and advices such as to be more detailed and specific about the company's organizational structure and objectives. He recommended me to be more direct about the categories on the market plan as who's going to be the company target market and how they were we going to be benefited from it. Its a unsolved issue that could bring benefits not only for those directly involved, but for everyone in the area being helped, therefore consequently the entire world.

He recommended me to say and highlight that poverty and pollution are a serious problem which are directed relate and this problem could be solved from my company's perspective and I should show how. It was a good help that direct me towards a more straightforward impact statement which could bring a better outcome for the company and for the world itself.

Besides these advices and tips he gave me an overall positive feedback