Relevant Concepts: Direct$-$order messages, sentence structure, cluttering phrases, sentence errors

This is a letter written by a club president to a career etiquette expert thanking her for a presentation given to the college business club. The career expert provided training for the club members about dining etiquette.

This message should begin with a general thank you message, then thanks for particular training needs, and end with a forward$-$looking closing.

Zach Boss

$10793$rd Ave.

Spring Lake, IL $86475$

Ms$.$ Lori Lear

$497$ Ford Ave.

Chicago, IL $84725$

April $14,2017$

Dear Ms$.$ Leer,

I must thank you for the presentation you made at our Career Professionalism Club at City Community College. The techniques we learned on dining to impress and networking proactively are very impressive and helpful.

I will not soon forget the time that, to your shock and dismay, one of my classmates attempted to eat an eggroll by stabbing it with a knife. Other than curtly reprimanding him, you showed him the proper way and it became a funny lesson for all of us$.$

In sum, the presentation was very informative and we look forward to our next dining opportunity during an interview situation because we know so much more.

Cordially,

Zach Boss

Career Professionalism Club President

zach.boss@ccc$.$edu

Instructions: Within the body of the e$-$mail below, highlight the sentences that contain errors. $($Click once to highlight and click again to remove highlight.$)$