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The following resume highlights the writer's work experience. This message contains several verb errors $($tense and passive voice$),$ number usage errors, grammatical errors, spelling errors, sentence errors $($run$-$on$,$ comma splices, etc.$),$ and style errors.

EDUCATION

A$.$S$.,$ Criminal Justice, Zane State, Zanesville, OH$,1999$

B$.$S$.,$ Criminal Justice, Ohio University, Athens, OH$,2000$

Masters of Public Administration, Ohio University, Athens, OH$,2009$

EXPERIENCE

Director of Intensive Probation

Athens County, Ohio

$2007-$Present

Work in a customer service oriented environment for offenders and community resources

Work with as many as seventy five case files at a time and security issues in court

Work with multiple court cases each day $($testifying$)$

Grant manager $-$ includes writing and executing

Authorize hiring for employees covered by grant

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