Revise each statement for style and tone using the techniques discussed. MAKE SURE TO REVISE UTILIZING YOUR TEXTBOOK AND WHAT YOU HAVE LEARNED.

A$.$ Our quadriplegic first$-$shift supervisor moves around the plant in a motorized wheelchair.

B$.$ Several patient satisfaction surveys have included positive recognition of Jim McLaurin, a male ER nurse.

The production manager talked about the new quality assurance regulations for nearly an hour.

After the recent downsizing, most employees are beginning to feel like rats on a sinking ship.

Please be advised that the city's new smoke$-$free policy is effective on January $1.$

F$.$ Adoption of a few financial strategies will increase the likelihood that financial goals will be achieved.