Revise the following message between two long-time co-workers to eliminate stiffness and undue formality. Dear Mr. Harry

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Revise the following message between two long-time co-workers to eliminate stiffness and undue formality.

Dear Mr. Harry Singh: Please be advised that you are instructed to review the revised procedures for sending courier packages to the United States. Please find attached a copy of the revised procedures for your perusal. Substantial savings will be realized if all personnel comply with the new procedures and I would be most grateful if you complied with them as well. Respectfully, Paula Wittington