Revise the following sentence to avoid dangling and misplaced modifiers.

1.The exciting Mandalay Bay is just one of the fabulous hotels you see strolling along the Las Vegas strip

In the following, identify the sentence fault (fragment, run-on sentence, comma splice). Then revise to remedy the fault.

2. Limousines line up outside Disney's wedding pavilion, ceremonies are scheduled in two-hour intervals.

Revise the following sentence so that its parts are balanced.

3. (Hint: Match adjectives.) Training seminars must be stimulating and a challenge

Revise the following sentence to eliminate the long lead-in.

4. We are sending this memo to notify everyone that anyone who wants to apply for telecommuting may submit an application immediately.

Revise the following sentence to avoid unnecessary there is/are and it is/was filler.

5. There is a password-checker that can automatically evaluate the strength of your password automatically.

Revise the following sentence to avoid confusing jargon, slang, clichs, and wordiness.

6. If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for preventing blowing the budget.

Revise the following sentence to unbury the verb.

7. Our committee promised to give consideration to your proposal at its next meeting.

Revise the following by incorporating a bulleted list. Improve parallel construction and readability while reducing wordiness.

8. This information is to let you know that a high-powered MBA program costs hundreds of dollars an hour. However, our program covers the same information. That information includes entrepreneurship tips as well as how to start a business. You will also learn information about writing a business plan and understanding taxes. In addition, our MBA program covers how to go about writing a marketing feasibility study. Another important topic that our program covers is employment benefits plans.