So I'm writing a Process essay About my first true love Please take a close on the picture I attached and let me know if you need any more details from me I want this to be included in the essay You ever been in-love or know what it feels like to be in-love , or loved ? All my life I was shown tough love from my parents , my family , friends etc until one day I was showed something different . I met this boy Dre and it really showed me the definition of true love and being able to express my feelings . All my life I was all ways shut down and was taught not shown my emotions . I met this Dre my fresh man year in high school we was just friends after a while we caught feelings for each other and rest is just history We starting dating our sophomore year - he allowed me to be my self- He allowed me to express my emotions without being judge - The first time I ever received flowers for a man he got time - He was always supportive of my dreams , my college decision - These are feeling I felt while being with him safe , protected and loved - when he touch it's like butterfly's - He got me my favorite candy when I'm not in the best mood- An example. "One day, I wasn't feeling well because I was stressed about school. My father and I weren't on good terms, and I felt like no one was there for me. He physically held me in his arms for hours while I cried and explained my worries, and he understood everything, and I didn't feel judge at all .

Suggestions for Process Writing 1 - Identify the desired outcome of the process analysis. 2 - Formulate a thesis that clarifies your attitude toward the process. 3 - Keep your audience in mind - place yourself in the reader's shoes. 4- Use mind mapping to identify the steps of the process in order to break down the process into its components. 5 - Explain the process one step at a time in chronological order. 6- Use transitional words to help the reader understand the order of the steps required. QUALITIES OF EFFECTIVE PROCESS WRITING 1. A clear purpose. The general purpose of process writing is either to explain a process so that a reader can understand it or to give instructions that the reader can follow. The "essay "Regular Work for an Irregular Economy" by Carmen Martino and David Bensman explains the process of getting daily work through a temporary agency. 2. A thesis that is clearly stated or implied. Like all other effective essays, a process narrative should have a clear thesis, or main idea. The thesis in Martino and Bensman's essay-clearly suggested and partially stated in the first two paragraphs-is that "If you are a Latino worker [in New Brunswick, New Jersey], your only option is to register at one of the labor agencies" in the area. 3. A chronological sequence of the major stages or steps of the process and clear transitions. For readers to be able to understand or reproduce a process, the description must follow a clear chronological sequence that includes all of the essential steps of the process. In addition, writers can help their readers to understand the processes they are describing by providing clear transitions. Martino and Bensman organize their essay according to the daily chronological process experienced by workers at the temp office: arrival at the temp office (paragraphs 3-5), getting to the work place (paragraph 6), and leaving the job at the end of the day (paragraph 7). Phrases such as "you arrive at the temp office," "when you get to the workplace," and "at the end of the day" introduce these major stages. 4. Inclusion of all details and definitions necessary for understanding or duplicating the process. Good process writing also includes all details necessary for describing the process and each of its stages-but no irrelevant or distracting details. Some necessary details are those that explain reasons for certain steps in the process. In their essay, for example Martino and Bensman explain that serious workers should "arrive at the temp office by 6. A.M." and just wait because the boss begins to give o ut work orders at 7:00. They also say that the system is costly because the office deducts $7 a day for transportation and charges $1 to $2 for cashing payroll checks. O Aa