SUBJECT - BUSINESS COMMUNICATION 1

Correcting Problem Sentences Section 1: Instructions

The sentences below contain errors; the sentences are fragments or run-on sentences, contain modifier problems, or have non-parallel construction.

Identify the problem in each sentence Rewrite the sentence to correct the issue (Note: There are several different, correct ways to rewrite a given sentence.)

Example Original Sentence: I always bring my reusable bag. When I go to the store. Problem: Fragment Rewrite: When I go to the store, I always bring my reusable bag.

1. Based on data analysis, the business professional decided to recommend a new product launch. Because he thought his boss would be supportive.

2. The hair dresser spent a significant amount of time with one very particular client she wa very happy when she left.

3. The zookeepers found that all the monkeys were especially active this morning they thought they must have had a very good sleep!

4. The neighbourhood grocery store has many different snack food options including popcorn, those purple candies that my friend likes and even someone will deliver it for you.

5. The cold was almost unbearable. Without proper winter gear.

6. The house is well appointed: granite countertops, all the appliances are stainless steel, and the basement has a gas fireplace.

7. Fun and exciting, Ruhi enjoyed the party her friend hosted.

8. The employee, well researched and concisely written, earned a promotion because of his proposal.

9. Travelling at excessive speed, the truck was hit by the car running the red light.

10. Since the flight was delayed Jasmine couldn't pick up her mother so Kelly took a train to her house.