Summary: Revise and proofread a draft email message to meet expectations for professionalism in email communication. Instructions: Download the attached EMAIL DRAFT, then revise it to help the writer: (1) avoid potential copyright infringement and other legal concerns; (2) use an appropriate document design; (3) correct many factual, grammatical and other mechanical errors. Subject: Visuals and Information Design From: georgegeauxgetter@BIGoil.com TOPICS COVERED IN ONLINE VIDEO COURSE A new, widely-adopted method for presentations: meetings are smarter, more effective, 20% shorter. Date: March 10, 2021 To: Fundamental design strategies for all information displays: sentences, tables, diagrams, maps, charts, images, video, data visualizations, and randomized displays for making graphical statistical inferences. Hello Dr samen, New ideas on spectatorship, consuming reports. How to assess the credibility of a presentation and its presenter, how to detect cherry-picking, how to reason about alternative explanations. I know you are interested in visuals and information design, so Im sending you a line to the website of Edward Tufte, a man who has been called the Leonardo da Caprio of data by The New York Times and the Galileo of graphics by Bloomberg.The site is www.edwardtufle.com/tufte!>. I just took Dr. Tufte's highly regarded video course on information design. The online course was offered at BIG Oil Corporation in Dallas, where work as an internship in the Communications Department. I also have forwarded you some information about Dr. Tufte's course topics. Standards of comparison for workaday and for cutting edge visualizations. How to identify excellent information architectures and use them as models and comparison sets for your own work and for the work of your contractors. Monitoring the designs of others. The future of information displays: 4K, 6K, 8K video maps moving in time. When I took your Technical Writing coarse in spring 2019, I earned a B on every assignment accept the email revision. I'm so grateful that my the university training has lead to an internship in communications with won of the top oil companies in the world. This is a rare opportunity, and I love working here (even though my female supervisor is an absolute idiot - duh). Practical examples are from everywhere: science, social science, music, business, finance, sports, art, medicine, architecture, NASA, government reports. BTW, YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MY PHOTOS OF LAST YEAR'S SPRING BREAK ON FACEBOOK. George Geaux Communications Intern B. I. G. Oil Corporation (0) 555.555.5555; (F) 555.555.5554 georgegeauxgetter@BIGoil.com "The Leonardo da Vinci of data." THE NEW YORK TIMES "The Galileo of graphics." BLOOMBERG Summary: Revise and proofread a draft email message to meet expectations for professionalism in email communication. Instructions: Download the attached EMAIL DRAFT, then revise it to help the writer: (1) avoid potential copyright infringement and other legal concerns; (2) use an appropriate document design; (3) correct many factual, grammatical and other mechanical errors. Subject: Visuals and Information Design From: georgegeauxgetter@BIGoil.com TOPICS COVERED IN ONLINE VIDEO COURSE A new, widely-adopted method for presentations: meetings are smarter, more effective, 20% shorter. Date: March 10, 2021 To: Fundamental design strategies for all information displays: sentences, tables, diagrams, maps, charts, images, video, data visualizations, and randomized displays for making graphical statistical inferences. Hello Dr samen, New ideas on spectatorship, consuming reports. How to assess the credibility of a presentation and its presenter, how to detect cherry-picking, how to reason about alternative explanations. I know you are interested in visuals and information design, so Im sending you a line to the website of Edward Tufte, a man who has been called the Leonardo da Caprio of data by The New York Times and the Galileo of graphics by Bloomberg.The site is www.edwardtufle.com/tufte!>. I just took Dr. Tufte's highly regarded video course on information design. The online course was offered at BIG Oil Corporation in Dallas, where work as an internship in the Communications Department. I also have forwarded you some information about Dr. Tufte's course topics. Standards of comparison for workaday and for cutting edge visualizations. How to identify excellent information architectures and use them as models and comparison sets for your own work and for the work of your contractors. Monitoring the designs of others. The future of information displays: 4K, 6K, 8K video maps moving in time. When I took your Technical Writing coarse in spring 2019, I earned a B on every assignment accept the email revision. I'm so grateful that my the university training has lead to an internship in communications with won of the top oil companies in the world. This is a rare opportunity, and I love working here (even though my female supervisor is an absolute idiot - duh). Practical examples are from everywhere: science, social science, music, business, finance, sports, art, medicine, architecture, NASA, government reports. BTW, YOU SHOULD CHECK OUT MY PHOTOS OF LAST YEAR'S SPRING BREAK ON FACEBOOK. George Geaux Communications Intern B. I. G. Oil Corporation (0) 555.555.5555; (F) 555.555.5554 georgegeauxgetter@BIGoil.com "The Leonardo da Vinci of data." THE NEW YORK TIMES "The Galileo of graphics." BLOOMBERG