The e-mail below is not written as clearly or concisely as it could be. In addition, it may have problems in organization, tone, or mechanical errors. Rewrite the email so it is appropriate for the audience and their purpose. Correct mechanical errors. Finally, add a subject line. (6)

To: allstudents@onlineuniversity.com

From: Director@onlineuniversity.com

Subject:

Its a disgrace and just plain pathetic that yall are always late and have poor attendance records....

Specially during COVID 19 when classes are being held online, you guys are doing classes from the comfort of ur home. Is being late justified anymore??

Its a serious problem and the university has even automated the attendance system through its attendance portal. Students dont relaise how much effort and time and money went into automating this attendance system. You folks are ignoring the value of attendance and punctuality. If you miss out on class you do not get to learn all the material and when its time for the exams, you are the ones who will suffer.

Why dont you get it? How hard it is to understand?

The new and improved online class system is fantastic and saves time. Be on time and dont miss classes.