This outline caught my interest because I do not know anything about cryptocurrency. You followed the sequence well. You met every sequence also, so your speech fits this style. I was thinking of the attention-getter; if it were someone famous or someone an audience member could look up to, that would help attention and gain credibility. I love how you are using the banking system and government as the need to shift how a person should invest. I can see how you may consider an audience member not knowing about cryptocurrency a weakness. Still, if you persuade them, they will aggressively seek out the information to make a change.

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