Touchstone 2.2: Informative Essay DraftBEFORE YOU STARTConsider revisiting the Types and Characteristics of Informative Writing tutorial about the purpose and types of informative writing. You might find it helpful to review the section on analytical writing if choosing Prompt A, and the section on definition writing if choosing Prompt B to kick-start writing this informative essay. ASSIGNMENT: Select one of the following writing prompts and draft a 3-5 page (approximately 800-1300 words) informative essay.

• Prompt A: Image Analysis
• Prompt B: Extended Definition

As a part of your completed draft, complete the color-coding activity described below. In addition, answer the "Think About Your Writing" questions on a separate sheet of paper and include it with your draft submissio

Comparing and Contrasting the Upbringing by both my Aunt and my Mother

Growing up under the care of both my aunt and mother has given me a unique perception on the different approaches to upbringing within my family. My aunty my mother share many connections , their ways of raising, discipline, and support differently. These differences influenced my understanding of what it means to be cared for and how different caregiving styles can exist within a family.

Primarily, my mother and my aunt differ in their raising someone. My mother is naturally, always attuned to my emotional and physical needs. She has an natural sense of when something is bothering me and offers comfort and reassurance without delay. Her raising approach is firsthand, ensuring that I always feel loved and supported. In contrast, my aunt's raising style is more reasonable. While she is equally loving, she lays emphasis on self-independence and freedom. She encourages me to solve problems on my own and to develop strength. This approach has helped me become more independent but also less dependent on seeking comfort from others.

When it comes to discipline, my mother and my aunt have distinctly different approaches. My mother's disciplinary style is gentle yet firm. She believes in explaining the reasons behind rules and consequences, which helps me understand the importance of good behavior. Her approach is more forgiving and aims to teach rather than to punish. In contrast, my aunt's disciplinary methods are more straightforward and stricter. She enforces rules with clear, immediate consequences, believing that a structured environment with defined boundaries is fundamental for proper upbringing.

The support systems provided by my mother and my aunt is differ. My mother has consistently been my listening ear and heartfelt guidance. She supports my aspirations with firm support in my abilities, often going above and beyond to ensure I have the resources and opportunities needed to succeed. On the other hand, my aunt provides a different type of support. While equally supportive, she emphasizes practical assistance, such as helping with schoolwork, teaching life skills, and career guidance. Her support preparing me for real-world challenges, complementing my mother's emotional encouragement with practical.

Despite their differences, the combined influence of my mother and my aunt has provided a well-rounded upbringing. My mother's raising, gentle, and supportive nature complements my aunt's pragmatic, disciplined, and practical approach. Together, they have equipped me with emotional intelligence, resilience, and the ability to navigate life's challenges. The blend of their caregiving styles has taught me the value of both emotional support and practical skills have shaping me into a balanced and strong individual.

In conclusion, the upbringing by my aunt and my mother displayed how diverse caregiving styles can co-exist. While my mother provides emotional raising and gentle discipline, my aunt offers practical support and strict structure. Both have played key roles in my upbringing and has teach me the importance of independence, discipline, love and strength. All this behaviors combined highlights the value that caregiving approaches can bring to a child's life.

Think About Your Writing

1. Did you use the point-by-point or block method to organize your body paragraphs? What made you decide to organize your essay in this way (3-4 sentences)?

I used the point-by-point method to organize my body paragraphs. This method allowed me to directly compare and contrast the aspects of raising, disciplining, and supporting between my mother and my aunt. By addressing each aspect individually, I was able to offer a clearer and more detailed analysis of their differing approaches.

2. In what ways did writing a comparison/contrast essay differ from the Narrative essay you wrote in Touchstone 1? Give specific examples (3-4 sentences)

Writing a comparison/contrast essay differed significantly from the narrative essay in structure and focus. The narrative essay centered around a sequential storytelling approach, recounting events (the unexpected lesson) , while the comparison/contrast essay required a structured analysis of similarities and differences between two subjects. For instance, the comparison/contrast essay involved evaluating and contrasting specific aspects of upbringing, whereas the narrative essay was more about detailing personal experiences and events.

3. Remember that the writing process is a recursive process, and your first draft of an essay is rarely your last. What part of the draft did you struggle with (3-4 sentences)?

I struggled with clearly distinguishing the differences in the support systems provided by my mother and my aunt. Initially, it was challenging to balance the emotional and practical aspects of their support. Comparing provide me with more clarity on how each approach influences me.