Use Parallelism to Write with Consistency and Impact

$6.$ Writing Balanced Sentences. Revise the following sentences to improve parallel structure.

Sample: I believe that employee satisfaction drives client satisfaction, which the satisfaction of shareholders is in tum driven by$.$

Revision: I believe that employee satisfaction drives client satisfaction, which in turn drives shareholder satisfaction.

a$)$ Renovating our current location is less expensive than to buy or rent a new property.

b$)$ Japanese and Korean carmakers are gaining in every market segment with products that offer reliability, performance, designs that are alluring, and prices that are competitive.

c$)$ Fabiola Cortez, of our R&D division, will now head our Regina facility; and our head office in Toronto will now be managed by Lu Huang, former chief of our consulting department.

d$)$ Good security is based on a combination of three types of identifying information: something you know, usually a password or PIN; something you have, such as a plastic card, key, or security token; and what you have on your person.

e$)$ Most biometric systems are expensive to buy and using them is awkward.

f$)$ A radio spot will air contest details, where promotional events will be held, and what products are new.

Emphasize Important Facts and Ideas; Minimize Less Important Ones