what are some primary mistakes that Jolene made and how to avoid the mistakes in your own proposal. Jolene is a junior engineer at The Acme Electric Company. When not working on the projects assigned to her by her supervising engineer, she worked to develop a new current regulator designed to cut the electric power consumption in aluminum plants by 35%. She knew that the regulator she designed could be produced with less production costs, was more reliable, and worked more efficiently than the current products being manufactured by Acme. Jolene, eager to improve her company's production capabilities and prove herself as an engineer, personally, but somewhat hastily, put together a 55-page proposal to the Executive Board, recommending that they begin manufacturing the newly designed regulator at all company plants. After a basic title page, she devoted the first 37 pages of the proposal to the mathematical theory and engineering design behind this new regulator, and the next 18 to descriptions of the new assembly line she planned to set up to produce regulators quickly. Buried in an appendix were the test results that compared her regulator's performance with present models, and a poorly drawn graph,

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Some primary mistakes that Jolene made in her proposal are 1 Lack of focus on the executive summary Jolene devoted a significant portion of her propos... View the full answer