What is a comment, compliment,connection, or a question about this draft.

my opinion the photo is too generic and not specific enough to what the author is saying in their piece. The second photo of a cappuccino is also pretty general and not fully connected to the text that wraps around it. | wish they were able to capture people interacting within the first photo, friends, romantic interests all talking and seemingly having a good time, that would work a bit better with the intention of this cafe. | also think that the second image of the cappuccino is too basic and could be from anywhere, | wanted to see something that made me \"appreciate the coffee experience,\" a bit more. Maybe something that showed an average frantic customer hastily running out the door with a to-go cup, next to a photo of someone calmly, happily relaxing and enjoying their experience. To more effectively integrate visuals in my profile, | learned that they cannot be too generic. | want to make them really specific to what | am saying in a certain area of text. | don't just want a photo of the bookstore empty, | would prefer if | can get a photo full of customers, who seem to be interacting and having fun with one another. | would like to get a few images of drinks that they make at the coffee section of the bookstore, but maybe | will include the barista, smiling and standing behind them. | also want to incorporate figure legends to explain or describe the photos underneath them so my audience understands how they fit into the larger picture. Two visuals that | would like to include are attached below, a picture of the owners looking friendly to help my readers feel a personal connection to them. As well as an image of specialty drinks, in cups that have their logo. This can help readers understand who runs the store and all of the creative things they have tried to draw in more customers. Even if | don''t necessarily have the time to take the photos myself, | still want them to fit into the context of my piece and not be too generic, that is my biggest concern at the moment