Writing Assignment: Rewriting an Ineffective E$-$Mail $($Unit O$...$

Instructions

Your Task

Sudy the following poorly writen e$-$mail message, then revise it in a document to remedy vague expressions, long lead$-$ins, there isthere are fillers, trite business expressions, clich$$s$,$ buried verbs, lack of parallelism, lack of plain English, and other probleris. Once complele, upload drecty into th$\text{'}$s assignment.

To: Roger M$.$ Karjala

Fromc Keiko Kurtz

Subject One Way to limprove Customer Relations

Mr Karjala.

Because of the fact that you asked for suggestions on how to improve customer relations, I am submifing my idea. I am