you will be rewriting the five sentences below into proper thesis statements. Then, you will write a thesis statement for your own What the American Dream Means to Me paper. This will become the preliminary thesis statement for your paper. It may get adjusted as you write and revise. Rewrite the sentences below so that each is a clear thesis statement.

1. There are many advantages and disadvantages to the countys new voting machines.

2. In this paper, I will debate the pros and cons of the motorcycle helmet law.

3. The insurance laws need to be rewritten.

4. In my opinion, Texas is a great place.

5. The Civil Rights Movement had a tremendous effect on this country.

After you correct these statements, write your own thesis statement for your paper. you will write a thesis statement for your own What the American Dream Means to Me