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Camille Elena Montano

1340 East Phillips Ave., Apt. D Littleton, CO 80126

Phone 455-5182 | E-Mail: Hotchilibabe@mail.com | LinkedIn

OBJECTIVE

Im dying to become an accounting associate in the real world with a big profitable company that will help me get the experience I need to become a CPA.

SKILLS

Microsoft Word, MS Outlook, Powerpoint, Excel, spreadsheets Excel; experienced with QuickBooks, great composure in stressful situations; 3 years as leader and supervisor and 4 years in customer service

EDUCATION

Arapahoe Community College, Littleton, Colorado. AA degree, Fall 2015

Now I am pursuing a BA in Accounting at CSU-Pueblo, majoring in Accounting; my minor is Finance. Completed 64 units of upper-level units. My expected degree date is June 2018; I recieved a Certificate of Completion in Entry Level Accounting in December 2015. My overall GPA is 3.5 on a 4.0 = A system.

I graduated East High School, Denver, CO in 2011.

Highlights:

• Named Line Manger of the Month at Target, 10/2014 and 03/2015
• Obtained a Certificate in Entry Level Accounting, June 2015
• Chair of Accounting Society, Spring and fall 2017
• Deans Honor List, Fall 2017
• Financial advisor training completed through Primerica (May 2016)
• Webmaster for M.E.Ch.A, Spring 2017

Part-Time Employment

Financial Consultant, 2016 to present I worked only part-time (January 2016-present) for Primerica Financial Services, Pueblo, CO to assist clients in refinancing a mortgage or consolidating a current mortgage loan and also to advice clients in assessing their need for life

insurance.

Target, Littleton, CO. As line manager, from September 2014 - August 2015, I supervised 12 cashiers and front-end associates. I helped to write schedules, disciplinary action notices, and performance appraisals. I also kept track of change drawer and money exchanges; occasionally was manager on duty for entire store. Named line manager of the month August 2014 and March 2015.

Mr. Ks Floral Design of Denver. I taught flower design from August, 2013 to September, 2014. I supervised 5 florists, made floral arrangements for big events like weddings, send them to customers, and restocked flowers.