Revise the follow-up message below to be more professional and effective, based on the principles in this chapter.

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December 2, 2021 Ms. Charlotte LeClaire Pebble Creek Publishing Inc. New York, NY Dear Ms. LeClaire: I wanted to thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to show me around Pebble Creek Publishing. I really enjoyed it. I've always wanted to join the publishing field, and Pebble Creek just seemed right to me. I loved watching how all of your employees work together to create the best possible product. They were quite a friendly bunch, especially the guys in the break room. As you know, I have had extensive editing experience in my English courses that I took here at ISU. I also took a Grammatical Analysis class through the Linguistics program here, which was really helpful for me. I really love making sure things are right, and I would love to do that for your company. I enjoyed my stay in New York very much. I am so looking forward to moving there very soon! Thank you so, so much, Terese Mart (515) 888-1212