$1.$ Revising:Applying Phase $3$ of the Writing Process

Time is money in any business environment. To be successful in the business world, you must be able to create concise and easy$-$to$-$read messages. As you revise, eliminate wordy expressions, long lead$-$ins, fillers, redundancies, and empty words. Your audience will appreciate your brevity.

Which of these sentences contain wordy expressions? Check all that apply.

If Marie calls, please tell her we will proceed normally.

Jason is aware of the problem and will take care of it$.$

In all probability, Alessia will receive a promotion this year.

I worked on the MarkMaster campaign for $35$ hours.

As a general rule, you should contact Jorge; he can afford you the opportunity to access the beta version.