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Attempts $$ Average $\frac{?}{8}$

Revising:Applying Phase $3$ of the Writing Process

Time is money in any business environment. To be successful in the business world, you must be able to create concise and easy$-$to$-$read messages.

As you revise, eliminate wordy expressions, long lead$-$ins, fillers, redundancies, and empty words. Your audience will appreciate your brevity.

Which of these sentences contain wordy expressions? Check all that apply.

In addition to the above, the client is of the opinion that, as a general rule, Comic Sans font is childish.

Help yourself to the cookies in the break room.

In very few cases will he return text messages.

I worked on the MarkMaster campaign for the period of $35$ hours last week.

Until our copier is replaced, please use the one on the third floor.