Assume you are Peter Randtu, the owner of Candyland, a manufacturer that makes sweets. The factory is in Cape Town, South Africa, with retail outlets in Cape Town, Durban and Johannesburg (all major cities in South Africa). Candyland also has an online sales option. You have noticed that the email communication emanating from the staff needs radical improvement. Keeping email etiquette in mind, write a business email to the staff, addressing six "venial sins of electronic mail." Include practical examples of emails you have seen that reflect each 'venial sin.' Marks will be awarded for: 

 Correct grammar, spelling, tone, and style (6) 

 Format of a business email (9) 

 Correct content (12)

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