6.31 Identify and Rewrite Nonconcise Sentences (LO6.1) For each of the following issues, identify three sentences...

 

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6.31 Identify and Rewrite Nonconcise Sentences (LO6.1) For each of the following issues, identify three sentences from the email message that are problematic and rewrite to make them more concise: (a) unnecessarily long sentences, (b) redundancy, (c) empty phrases, and (d) wordy prepositional phrases. 6.32 Rewrite the Email Message (LO6.1) Ensure that the message is more concise. In addition to making sentence-level changes, also ensure that paragraph length is appropriate and eliminate unneeded information. As you rewrite the message, focus on making the message as clear as possible. 6.31 Identify and Rewrite Nonconcise Sentences (LO6.1) For each of the following issues, identify three sentences from the email message that are problematic and rewrite to make them more concise: (a) unnecessarily long sentences, (b) redundancy, (c) empty phrases, and (d) wordy prepositional phrases. 6.32 Rewrite the Email Message (LO6.1) Ensure that the message is more concise. In addition to making sentence-level changes, also ensure that paragraph length is appropriate and eliminate unneeded information. As you rewrite the message, focus on making the message as clear as possible.

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Answer Subject Followup on Quarterly Report Meeting Dear Team I hope this email finds you well I wanted to reach out to provide some followup on our recent quarterly report meeting that took place las... View the full answer