7. Rewrite the statement to make it more positive: It is impossible for the builder to pour the concrete until the soil is no longer soggy. 8. Rewrite the sentence to use bias free language (make it more inclusive): Does each salesman have his own smartphone loaded with his special sales information? 9. Rewrite the sentence to use bias free language (make it more inclusive): Serving on the panel are a lady vetrinarian, an Indian CPA, two businessmen, and a female doctor. 10. Rewrite the sentence to remove the unnecessary introduction and fillers (make it as short as possible): We are writing to you in order to inform you of the fact that your order will actually arrive on June 1st