A student chose LinkedIn to request a recommendation from Professor Galvan. The following message suffers from many writing faults, including poor tone and flawed persuasive strategy.$$

Your Task. Analyze the LinkedIn message and list at least five weaknesses.$$ If your instructor directs, revise the message.$$ Decide whether to use LinkedIn, of which the recipient is a member, or an e$-$mail to make the request.

Harrison Galvan

Hey, Prof!!How's it goin? You still travel to Asia a lot? You and me talked about Japan alot because my family is originally Japanese. You remember me$,$ don't ya$?$ I jus wanted to know would you write a letter of recommendation for me$?$ I$\text{'}$m aplying for the MBA program. I was always helpin you out with distriuting papers and sat upfront. Never missed a class. Anyhoo, I was wondering if you'd write me a ltter.$$ In case you wonder, I had you in FALL $2023$ for business writting. best class I ever took. Oh$,$ I need it real soon, on Friday this week?? Call me on my cell $2014428559$ or use Messengr. Thanx., Kit$$