Find and identify a poorly drafted negative or persuasive communication $($e$-$mail$)$ you may have come across at your $($or any other$)$ workplace.

Provide the context and the communication $($e$-$mail$)$ identified by you $($You may remove any sensitive information and identifiers for confidential reasons.$)2.$ Identify and explain the weak areas in the mail.

Rewrite the communication as per the principle of effective business writing and suitable strategies relevant to the type of communication $($negative$/$persuasive$)$

Scoring Rubric

Criteria Weightage

CO$-1,$ PO$-6$

Context of the situation including the poor communication $5$ marks

CO$-2,$ PO$-2$

Identification and listing of Specific improvement areas $10$ marks

CO$-3,$ PO$-4$b

Revised Communication$-$ Organization & Development of ideas $10$ marks

CO$-3,$ PO$-4$b

Revised communication $$ Tone and word choice $5$ marks

CO$-3,$ PO$-4$b

Revised Communication$-$ Spelling, Grammar, Sentence & Paragraph Structure