i already did A-C
i need help with D. help me rewrite the bullet list in A in correct sentence that has the correct parellism
the second part "Similarly, you should not use software that are not authorized from the internet" has the wrong subject verb. Help me correct that.
Note: This is worth 40 points of your final Quiz 2 grade (20 points for each comment).
You will need to access my comments from your memorandum assignment for this part of the quiz. Before you begin this part of the quiz, go into "My Grades" and access your memorandum assignment. Look at the document and review my comments that are numbered and highlighted in BLUE on your document. You will need to record these comments and write answers to them for this part of the quiz.
Directions: On your memorandum submission I inserted two (2) comments about what you need to review and revise for the written section of Quiz 2. You may see other comments, but the grammatical issues that I want you to address for this assignment contain A RED SQUIGGLY LINE beneath the sentence and BLUE HIGHLIGHTEDtext with a numbered COMMENT BOX above the sentence.
To receive a good score on this assignment you must provide 4 things for each of the two grammatical issues I underlined on your memorandum.
- Identify and acknowledge the incorrect sentence by either retyping it or copying and pasting it to your MS Word file.
- Re-write (or copy and paste) my comments about the incorrect sentence. In your submission, re-write my comments or question (you should be able to paste it by highlighting the comment and selecting CONTROL+C and then pasting the selection by selecting CONTROL+V). Make sure that you number each comment.
- Provide a comprehensive response to each of my comments or questions by answering or completing the request or task.
- Correct the sentence. You must revise your sentence.
See example below.
1A. Your identification of the incorrect sentence: The red squiggly line is beneath the sentence above, the text is highlighted in blue, and a yellow comment box is above the sentence above. Therefore, the student must retype this sentence:
for the proofreading and editing project stipulated for the books. (identification of your error 5 points)
1B. Copy and paste my comment in the yellow comment box (it should be in the right margin):
Sentence fragment: Explain why this sentence is a fragment and then correct the sentence. (resubmission of my comment to you 5 points)
1C. Your explanation to my comment: You write might write--
This sentence is a fragment because it lacks a concrete subject and a concrete verb. (identification of the rule for your error 5 points)
1D. Your corrected sentence:
Although employees sharepasswords for the proofreading and editing project stipulated for the company's books, this can no longer be tolerated.
(your corrected sentence 5 points)
Directions: On your memorandum submission I inserted two (2) comments about what you need to review and revise for the written section of Quiz 2. You may see other comments, but the grammatical issues that I want you to address for this assignment contain A RED SQUIGGLY LINE beneath the sentence and BLUE HIGHLIGHTED text with a numbered COMMENT BOX above the sentence. To receive a good score on this assignment you must provide 4 things for each of the two grammatical issues I underlined on your memorandum. A. Identify and acknowledge the incorrect sentence by either retyping it or copying and pasting it to your MS Word file. B. Re-write (or copy and paste) my comments about the incorrect sentence. In your submission, re-write my comments or question (you should be able to paste it by highlighting the comment and selecting CONTROL.Cand then pasting the selection by selecting CONTROL+V). Make sure that you number each comment. Provide a comprehensive response to each of my comments or questions by answering or completing the request or task. D. Correct the sentence. You must revise your sentence. C IMA Tata Sex H Pont ww We compenser Det the sentence. You made your inte will not tolerate my employee downloading nord software from the internet We want to use software liced by the company at home, you must check with the IBM tech team to make sure the permitted W when you are ing doud storage, its encrypted to make sure no one access to your data Searty, you should not use software that not authored from the weet elem or notariel review the run for video M twee (Aries for the crew that your own bare The White DI - Directions: On your memorandum submission I inserted two (2) comments about what you need to review and revise for the written section of Quiz 2. You may see other comments, but the grammatical issues that I want you to address for this assignment contain A RED SQUIGGLY LINE beneath the sentence and BLUE HIGHLIGHTED text with a numbered COMMENT BOX above the sentence. To receive a good score on this assignment you must provide 4 things for each of the two grammatical issues I underlined on your memorandum. A. Identify and acknowledge the incorrect sentence by either retyping it or copying and pasting it to your MS Word file. B. Re-write (or copy and paste) my comments about the incorrect sentence. In your submission, re-write my comments or question (you should be able to paste it by highlighting the comment and selecting CONTROL.Cand then pasting the selection by selecting CONTROL+V). Make sure that you number each comment. Provide a comprehensive response to each of my comments or questions by answering or completing the request or task. D. Correct the sentence. You must revise your sentence. C IMA Tata Sex H Pont ww We compenser Det the sentence. You made your inte will not tolerate my employee downloading nord software from the internet We want to use software liced by the company at home, you must check with the IBM tech team to make sure the permitted W when you are ing doud storage, its encrypted to make sure no one access to your data Searty, you should not use software that not authored from the weet elem or notariel review the run for video M twee (Aries for the crew that your own bare The White DI
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