Part 1: Revision Read the following sentences and identify errors in sentence structure, punctuation, word choice, word formation, tone, numbers, or capitalization. Re-write the poorly written statements into effective ones, focusing on their conciseness, grammatical accuracy, positive word choice, bias-free tone, and correct spelling and punctuation. (10 points) 1. In a result, our prospectives will think its convient to access to our service.

2. As for top manager, I especially take it as my ownership and really eager to do something to help the company go through this hard time.

3. Facing to the situation of the serious fall back of our Vancouver branchs regular customers due to a wide use of no name phone cards, some new measures can be taken to win back our old customers which are obtained after I did deep research.

4. We can launch a program that is similar to the gas station.