Plan Introductory paragraph background information: - obesity big problem in the world today -the WHO says 13% of all adults obese - can cause serious health problems - who is responsible? Individual or governments? thesis statement: Some people believe governments should introduce laws to help improve the obesity problem, but others believe it is up to the individual. body paragraph 1 position 1 with supporting arguments and details: Individuals should take responsibility for controlling their own weight. - control portion size-calorie intake for adults - learn to eat a balanced diet - proportions of different food types -read nutritional information on packaging - to eat less of the unhealthy things like sugar and fat body paragraph 2 position 2 with supporting arguments and details: Governments should be responsible for the problem. - restaurant groups should give information to customers - help people choose a healthy meal should be a tax on foods high in fat and sugar - junk food expensive so people buy less governments should support healthy eating campaigns-helping people to eat a low-calorie, balanced diet concluding paragraph summary of both arguments: Government should pass new laws, but individuals still need to take responsibility. your opinion with reasons: I believe governments can encourage people but ultimately it is up to the individual. prediction or recommendation: Individuals and governments need to take action to solve the obesity