Please review, revise and correct the errors in Mr. Shrute's message and improve the overall content of his letter to make it more professional and persuasive. You will have to change and add content to the message to make it more effective.

Your final uploaded assignment should be 1-2 pages in length and should be presented in the format of a professional business letter that would be sent to a client.

For this assignment, you must achieve several important goals:

1. Revise and improve the quality of the content and tone of the message.to make the letter more professional and persuasive. You have to make the letter make sense! Follow the guidelines discussed in the textbook and my lectures for advice on improvements in content and style.
2. Pay close attention to errors in the format, layout and spacing of the letter. Revise the format, layout and spacing, and make sure that the letter is properly formatted when submitted. It should look just as if you were submit a professional business letter.
3. Fix all typos including grammar capitalization, and spelling errors.
4. Revise the bullet points to follow the rules of parallelism. You must demonstrate that you know how to use bullet points effectively and accurately in a professional business letter. Bullet points (in the correct parallel format) must be included in the letter you submit for this assignment.
5. You must incorporate at least three of the techniques of persuasion (methods of influence) discussed in Chapter 10 to make your letter more persuasive.

   The letter:

   6/23/21

   Dwight K. Schrute

   Dunder mifflin Paper Company

   999 lost way Arlington, Tx 76010

   Dr. Kevin Carr

   The University of Texas at Arlington

   701 S West St, Arlington, Tx 76010

   Hey Kevin,

   I hope that you are having an absolutely stupendous day. I would really really like to Thank you for taking time out of your day to review my letter here. I want to sell you my paper from my excelent paper company. All the other paper company stinks.

   For instance, Dunder Mifflin's Papers paper:

6. Is the best in the company
7. 100% of our paper are recycled
8. Our employer's offer outstanding service.
9. cares more about you than any other company you will meet.

10. All in all, Dunder Mifflin is the best company you will meet. Thank you for your time and you better get back to me soon because this deal is gonna be gone tomorrow.

    Dwight