Read the following e-mail and analyze its effectiveness. List at least 5 of the issues you...

 

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Read the following e-mail and analyze its effectiveness. List at least 5 of the issues you found with it, and recommend changes to resolve them. Use AIDA when needed. Message: Hey, Prof! How's it going? You still travel Asia a lot? You and me talked about Japan a lot because my family is originally Japanese. You remember me, don't ya? I jus wanted to know would you write a letter of recommendation for me? I'm applying for the MBA program. I was always helpin you out with distributing papers and sat upfront. Never missed a class. Anyhoo, I was wondering if you'd write me a Itter. In case you wonder, I had you in Fall 2016 for business writing, best class i ever took. Oh I need it real soon, on Friday of this week? Call me on my cell 123-456-7891 or us FB. Thanx., Brandon Read the following e-mail and analyze its effectiveness. List at least 5 of the issues you found with it, and recommend changes to resolve them. Use AIDA when needed. Message: Hey, Prof! How's it going? You still travel Asia a lot? You and me talked about Japan a lot because my family is originally Japanese. You remember me, don't ya? I jus wanted to know would you write a letter of recommendation for me? I'm applying for the MBA program. I was always helpin you out with distributing papers and sat upfront. Never missed a class. Anyhoo, I was wondering if you'd write me a Itter. In case you wonder, I had you in Fall 2016 for business writing, best class i ever took. Oh I need it real soon, on Friday of this week? Call me on my cell 123-456-7891 or us FB. Thanx., Brandon

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This email could be improved in terms of clarity professionalism and effectiveness Here are five issues and recommendations to address them 1 Informal... View the full answer