Rewrite the following letters, making them appropriate for a reader whose native language is not English. Identify the intended readers cultural heritage. As you revise the letters, pay attention to the words, measurements, and sentence constructions you employ. Be sure to consider the readers cultural traditions and avoid cultural insensitivity.

a. Dear Mr. Wong,

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I am enclosing a brochure for you to study, and I really hope you will examine it carefully. You would be foolish to let a deal like Off-Wall Street Mutual pass you by. Go for it. Call me by 3:00 today.

Hurriedly,