Study the following poorly written e$-$mail message. Then make revisions to correct the email. To help with your revision, be sure to check for each of the following items. If you do not understand one of these items, please email me for help:

vague expressions,

long lead$-$ins,

there is$/$there are fillers,

trite $($overused$,$ unoriginal$)$ business expressions,

clich$$s$,$ buried verbs,

lack of parallelism,

lack of plain English,

and other problems.