The application package from Xinyi Fan is wellpresented and fits in nicely with VACO LLCs Financial Internship position. Her application letter and CV provide a strong starting point for her candidacy. Improvements centered on quantifying accomplishments and adding noteworthy personal traits or accomplishments would provide a more complete image of her capabilities and potential. The tone of the application letter is suitably formal and conveys Xinyi\'s sincere interest in the position, indicating that she is a committed and serious applicant. Given the clarity and applicability of the material she included, if I were in charge of recruiting, I would definitely give her application a closer look and see her as a potential intern.