The following has problems with reader access, this includes organization, paragraphing, headings, lists, etc. as well as style and tone. It is too wordy, too repetitive, unclear in its overall message, and it does not consider its audience. There are also numerous grammar issues. Revise, making use of what we have covered in this class and your Business Comms textbook. Please make sure you revise the document to read clearly and concisely, while not omitting any important information. Do not worry about including the address block or using a subject line for this one, just focus on the rewrite.

Dear __________: We have been inundated with requests for information from investors, businesses, manufacturers, and the public about Lorelss plans to produce the new high octant, fuel-effective vehicles since our announcement of this revolutionary design, which resulting from hundreds of hours of research into the bright future of vehicles. So please forgive for responding to you with a form letter, as we cannot respond effectively to each and every individual who has written to us with an inquiry. The new cars will reach high speeds quicker, use less fuel, and have more creature comforts for customers. For 100 km traveled, they will only need to use 10 km worth of fuel that a traditional car would use. The new cars will cost manufacturers less to operate because of reduced parts required, and those savings may be reflected in your prices, and the new cars will offer consumers faster transport to their destination, featuring a sleek style, and they will be available in 2022. For the first time, Lorelss manufacturing division will use outside suppliers for basic parts, so that our engineers can focus their expertise on the sophisticated systems required. Were very excited about this new efficiency.

We expect to reap many benefits from it as Lorels continues to meet the future needs of drivers, passengers, and the overall automotive industry. Lorels envisions that municipalities will be building a stronger highway infrastructure in order to overcome the traffic congestion now so dramatically clogging up major cities. To aid in this positive development, we have designed our new vehicle to function well within these environments.

Sincerely,