This is what I wrote in an assignment on a case study to lower CAUTI in a transplant unit using the CDC guidelines for insertion, maintenance, and removal of a urinary catheter. The professor's comment is in the second paragraph. In your opinion, what do you think I can add to respond to his comment

Data management

The data collected for the study is partly nominal and partly ordinal and takes a mixed paradigm. The majority of the information gathered will be from prior studies on weighing the various ways that society could be made better when preventing the prevalence of catheter-related infections. The main problem is the spread of urinary tract infections pivotal to catheter use (Safdar et al., 2016). The main area of concern to mitigate this problem is having a hygiene plan to make it better. The whole intervention process will take about three months with thematic and content analysis.

Profession Commend

Jean: The only suggestion is adding to the data management plan.Planning for a project involves making decisions about data resources and potential products. A data management plan describes data that will be acquired or produced during research; how the data will be managed, described, and stored, what standards you will use, and how data will be handled and protected during and after the completion of the project. This section is a common weakness to many students and needs to be robust for the reader to appreciate what is being collected and how the variables are being measured for success.