My name is Daryl Davidson, and I am assistant to the director of Human Resources at MicroSinergie.

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My name is Daryl Davidson, and I am assistant to the director of Human Resources at MicroSinergie. Our company has a Yammer-based enterprise social platform, which we would like to use more efficiently to elicit feedback on employee issues and concerns. I understand you have a software product called Opinionware that might do this, and I need to ask you some questions about it.

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Revise the above wordy openings for message so that they are more direct and concise. Write an appropriate subject line and opening sentence for each one.

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Essentials Of Business Communication

ISBN: 9780357714973

12th Edition

Authors: Mary Ellen Guffey, Dana Loewy

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