1.This message fails to include an effective subject line that summarizes the main idea.

SUGGEST more effective subject line for this message:_____________________________

2.Rewrite the email's salutation or greeting so it is most effective :___________________________

3.How should the writer's five tips be presented most effectively in this email: (select two from the Answer Box below: __________________ and ____________________

Answer Box for question 3:

-As a list

-In a table

-In a bubble or cloud

-Using bullets

-Using numbering (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)

-Using lettering (a,b,c,d,e,f,g)

4. one example of wordiness in this email: __________________

5. one example of needless repetition in this email: _________________

6. an example of inappropriate tone or style in this email: ___________________

7.Copy the fragment that appears in the message and PASTE it in the blank: _________________________________________________________________

8. one spelling error in this message: ________________________________

9.NOTIE down the closing for this email and then explain what is wrong with the closing. (Explain how the closing is ineffective in one to two sentences).

First sentence: The closing for this email is....

Second sentence: The reason this closing is not effective is...