Below are four paragraphs which require editing and revision. Your task is to edit and revise two of the paragraphs below. 1. Choose two of the four paragraphs to edit and revise. Cut and paste your selections and edit and revise directly on the discussion board. 2. Use professional language. 3. Provide feedback based on the original paragraphs and an explanation of your edits and revisions. HINT: Look for grammar and syntax errors, including spelling. Look for wordiness, clarity or lack of, slang or colloquial language, lack of sources where required, and writing errors to avoid. PARAGRAPH #2 The main problem is the teenagers are getting addicted by drugs and spoiling their future and their life. In recent years rate of death caused by drugs is much more than cocaine and heroin.In todays life high school students are also highly addicted by drugs they get their drugs mainly from their parents or friends. The main reason why teens start drugs are mainly because of getting pressured by their friends. Almost 60% of illicit drug users in Canada are between 15 to 24 years of age