Document Makeover #$9$: RESUME

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RESUME

Relevant Concepts

$$ Persuasive messages

$$ Employment messages

$$ Sentence structure

$$ Verb tense

$$ Punctuation

$$ Number usage

$$ Professional tone

$$ Understanding your audience

The following resume highlights the writer$$s work experience. This message contains several verb errors $($tense and passive voice$),$ number usage errors, grammatical errors, spelling errors, sentence errors $($run$-$on$,$ comma splices, etc.$),$ and style errors.

EDUCATION

$-$ A$.$S$.,$ Criminal Justice, Zane State, Zanesville, OH$,1999$

$-$ B$.$S$.,$ Criminal Justice, Ohio University, Athens, OH$,2000$

$-$ Masters of Public Administration, Ohio University, Athens, OH$,2009$

EXPERIENCE

Director of Intensive Probation

Athens County, Ohio

$2007-$Present

$-$ Work in a customer service oriented environment for offenders and community resources

$-$ Work with as many as seventy five case files at a time and security issues in court

$-$ Work with multiple court cases each day $($testifying$)$

$-$ Grant manager $$ includes writing and executing